Thursday, November 5, 2009

Work - 55 Fiction


Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.


 Work


Your first day of the first job ...
Many doubts, anxieties and excitement  ...
Special rituals and sacred prayers at home ...
Lucky colours and favourite numbers ...
As soon as you walked few steps on the road, a black cat crossed your way ...
What does it mean?
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It means that cat has also got some work to do.



21 comments:

Nethra said...

It was nice. But, I have read this somewhere.
Anyways, waiting for the next story:)

Roshmi Sinha said...

"It means that cat has also got some work to do."

Absolutely! Like catching a plump mouse or two. It gotta have its breakfast you know... 'nutrition' is not just for humans only ;)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Nethra,

Hi buddy....
Thanks for informing me about 'reading somewhere'.....
This is my second post which got the tag 'already tag'.....
I have to be more careful from now.
Thanks a lot buddy :)

cheers,
mahesh

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Roshmi

Yeah, you are absolutely correct....
Nutrition ..... I hope the cat is not superstitious about humans :) :) :)
thanks :)

cheers,
mahesh

BK Chowla said...

Now onwards I will never be superstitious about cats.

Shilpa said...

Man must be upset cause cat crossed his path and cat will be upset cause a man crossed its path. :)

By the way, did you read the story that i mailed you. Liked it?

shilpa

Shruti said...

Mahesh ur idea of writing this in 55 words is awewsome, like nethra said, i too have a feel of reading it somewhere!
Though the story line is familiar, your writing style reflects here!
I am falling in your love with your writings!

Rachana Shakyawar said...

@ Mahesh
Really a nice one!
But I was wondering if a human can think about the cat as an obstacle…how about vise versa thought.

Cheers!

Shruti said...

U r angry on me or what? Mistook what i said about that beauty post eh?!
If so, am sorry mahi!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Chowla ji,

thanks a lot....thats really nice of you the way your respond to my posts.
Thanks again. :)

cheers,
mahesh

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Shilpa,

........"cat will be upset cause a man crossed its path". :)

I support this. Indeed cat must feel upset living around with humans :) :) :)..

Yeah. i read that post.....i liked the topic so much that am in a dilemma now whether to comment on it or write a post on it.....
Keep sending me such posts...
thanks buddy?
BTW, how abt ur studies ?

cheers,
mahesh

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Shruti....

Hey....thanks a bunch for both your cautious and supportive feedback. I have get rid of this "somewhere read" tag for my posts. Thanks for that.

...."I am falling in your love with your writings!"..

Aromatic words .... thanks dear.

I have to confirm whether Burz-e-dubai is the highest building in the world....(hope i wont fall from there :)) .....

Angry ???..me???? on you????.....
Why would i?
No way?
BTW, what's der in beauty topic that can make me angry re?
Chill dear ....... am quite ok and normal...
May i know what made you to think that i am angry?
Enna irikke?
Do u thnk am romba angry?
Tamil terimaa?
telugu mera baap?
..............
BTW, I want to have your take on my earlier post "Questions-2"
keep smiling :)

cheers,
mahesh

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Rachana,

Yeah you are correct. The cat should think in that way about the wicked humans too...
thanks buddy...

cheers,
mahesh

shilpa said...

Studies are fine. :)

Singh Amit said...

Very Nice 55 fiction Mahesh..:)
Even animals have to suffer from our nonsensical thoughts...
I really feel pity towards Owls who were regarded as so unlucky and inauspicious
Cheers!!

Singh Amit said...
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Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Amit,

Yeah, humans who boast their scientific achievements and intelligence ..... seldom think about the rationality behind their superstitions
Thanks :)

cheers
mahesh

HaRy!! said...

he he..meow purr!! wait till the cat reads this story!

HaRy

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Hary....

Yeah.... it will read tomorrow as today is not auspicious for black cats....

cheers,
mahesh

Shruti said...

@Mahesh
Am not such a biggie re...still an amateur...so u need not fall from Burz-e-dubai.

In the beauty topic, u said something and i understood something and vice versa!
I dint think u r romba angry, but still...I thought i made u feel bad!
Tamil theriyum :)
Will read that :)

Vishnu said...

do u know the reason y they sit for 5 mins after a black cat passes??

humorous..