Resonance - 55 Fiction
Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.
Resonance
Shekar met his best friends, Sreenu and Venkat, after three years. He gave them a grand treat at Ohri's. After dinner, he paid the bill and gave 1000 rupees as a tip to the bearer . Venkat asked, "Hey Shekar, isn't it the tip quite heavy ?". No, I did the same job when i was in US.
11 comments:
Hey, nice one. :)
Good... But a little confused... He works as a bearer and earns so much money that he can tip by thousands?
@ Netra .... Thanks :)
@ Saurabh..
He did the same job in USA. He is giving party in India. The currency criteria .
good one...
@ Chetan ....
Thanks for dropping by :)
Interesting.. nd a nice title :)
Hahaha..
Nice one!!
Ironic 55. liked it. MK.as they say - what goes around comes around.
Hmmmm good.
Just a little suggestion you can try if you find it good. Instead of one single paragraph, you can try splitting the lines appropriately.
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@ Vipul ...
Thanks for the special mentioning of the title :)
@ Yemiledu ...
Thanks :)
@ Gyanban...
Thanks for the response
@ Mr ...
Thanks a bunch for your suggestion and am going to implement it in my next 55ier. Thanks again for the valid feedback :)
Awesome mahesh.....good title buddy.....n u have become a master of 55-fiction.......
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