Sunday, February 14, 2010

Resonance - 55 Fiction

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.


Resonance

Shekar met his best friends, Sreenu and Venkat, after three  years. He gave them a grand treat at Ohri's. After dinner, he paid the bill and gave 1000 rupees as a tip to the bearer . Venkat  asked, "Hey Shekar, isn't it the tip quite heavy ?".  No, I did the same job when i was in US. 

11 comments:

Nethra said...

Hey, nice one. :)

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Good... But a little confused... He works as a bearer and earns so much money that he can tip by thousands?

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Netra .... Thanks :)

@ Saurabh..

He did the same job in USA. He is giving party in India. The currency criteria .

Chetan said...

good one...

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Chetan ....

Thanks for dropping by :)

Vipul Grover said...

Interesting.. nd a nice title :)

Yemiledu said...

Hahaha..
Nice one!!

Gyanban said...

Ironic 55. liked it. MK.as they say - what goes around comes around.

Mr said...

Hmmmm good.

Just a little suggestion you can try if you find it good. Instead of one single paragraph, you can try splitting the lines appropriately.

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Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Vipul ...

Thanks for the special mentioning of the title :)

@ Yemiledu ...
Thanks :)

@ Gyanban...
Thanks for the response

@ Mr ...

Thanks a bunch for your suggestion and am going to implement it in my next 55ier. Thanks again for the valid feedback :)

sachin said...

Awesome mahesh.....good title buddy.....n u have become a master of 55-fiction.......