Wednesday, February 17, 2010

Fire - 55 Fiction

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.

 
Fire



It was raining.....
She was anxiously waiting for a bus on a deserted road.....
He saw her with a desire.....
He scanned her from top to bottom.....
His senses were ignited by the flavours and aromas of her appealing appearance in the most beautiful  way .....
He approached her and killed her.....
He was a cannibal.

PS : 1. The fire of HCL inside a stomach doesn't know fiction.
        2. This is a GREEN Post

6 comments:

Nethra said...

Yuck! He ate her. :-/
Nice story! :)

nikhy said...

it's good that she was prey to hunger of his stomach not to his desire....not a bad man...not a bad death...

R. Ramesh said...

very good one:)

Nethra said...

You are tagged. Check my blog.
http://otioseopinions.blogspot.com/2010/02/tagged-so-here-i-am.html

Yemiledu said...

Hey that a nice one!!!
:~)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Nethra
@ Nikhy
@ Ramesh
@ Yemiledu

Thanks guys :)