Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Bonding - 55 Fiction

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.

 Bonding
 

The nine months of her painful and anxious waiting came to an end  with the delivery of a beautiful and healthy girl child......
Small and cute eyes, pink cheeks, tender fingers.....
Everyone in the family are extremely happy.....
She is relaxed now.....
After few days she left her child forever.....
She is a surrogate mother.

PS: Surrogate mothers in India cost considerably lower (about, a fourth of what they would cost in the United States). 

15 comments:

Nethra said...

Helping a sterile couple is a good deed, isn't it?
Kudos to such mothers. :)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Nethra....
Yea.....hats of to their service.

Shilpa Garg said...

Good one, Mahesh! Unexpected end. :)

Also, in India there are less legal hassles. Our laws allow the surrogate mother to sign away her rights to the baby as soon as the baby is delivered. :O

HaRy!! said...

Mahesh...awesome reality post!! hav been disapearing from yur blogs lately:(

geeta said...

it touches reality...nice one..


Thank you so much for inspiring me to publish my 55ers .Will do that in near future..hope my 55ers doesn't disappointment you

Yemiledu said...

Good post!
The emotional attachment a surrogate mother develops to the baby is nothing less to the biological mother...
Hmm..Touching one...

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Rachana Shakyawar said...

@ Mahesh

Truly touched!
It started with the motherhood and ended with the womanhood!

Amazing lines...no doubt everytime your 55fiction reflects the true picture and reality check of the world around!


Very Well done!

:) U always...
Keep the spark Alive..

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Rachana...
Thanks for the pat buddy :)

@ Vijay...
It is a bonus for me this time :). Thanks for the encouragement :)

@ Shruthi...
Thanks for the words and the special privilege accredited to the blog....

@ Yemiledu ...
Well said and it holds rationality too ...

Adisha said...

Another wonderful post... :) So hard to let go of someone you nutured for 9 months ... but then helping somoene else have the joy of parenthood is just as wonderful...

Most things in india are cheaper , no surprise about surrogates being cheaper too :(

evanescentthoughts said...

That was a good one Mahesh. Totally unexpected ending

sachin said...

Thats really unbeliveble...how a mother is separated from his child...

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Sachin.... thanks dude :)

@ Adisha... thanks for the response.

@ evanescentthoughts ... Thanks for the visit and the words :)