Monday, October 5, 2009

55 words # 1

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.



Enough
 

We have seen enough rains and floods.
We have watched enough visuals in news channels regarding the plight of the victims. We have criticized enough, the loopholes of Indian administration and disaster management. We have passed enough comments about the responsibilities of Government. Now, we have enough time to act.
Please, DONATE and Contribute, NOW !!!.





Expressions
 

I was in second standard when i had a peculiar feeling to say those special words to our English teacher. I never concentrated on what she taught in the class, but I used to observe how she taught. Somehow, I had conveyed her those three words when I was in ninth... , "I Love You, Mom ".






Waiting
 

She was waiting for him since fifteen minutes. He was quite handsome and manly. She knew that he would definitely come to talk with her, though it is a public place . Her wait ended as he had approached her and looking into her beautiful eyes, he said in a gentle and mild voice, "Ticket Please... "




Taste of Life
 

He is thinking about his strong and intense desire to taste that drink. Many of his friends have tasted it. He thought about his wife and kids for a while. But, he felt, this is the right time in his life to taste it. So, finally he drank it , the pesticide, Indian farmer's favourite drink.



Writing
 

I was thinking.
I was thinking about my strong desire.
I was thinking about my strong desire to write.
I was thinking about my strong desire to write a topic
I was thinking about my strong desire to write a topic in exactly 55 words.
My thinking did work and I am done with many.

25 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey,

How come you get such innovative ideas . You surprise me every time with your presentation. I dont know how could you manage every topic in 55 words exactly.
And yes, I am donating, thanks.

Anonymous said...

Hi

Your topic "Enough" did impacted me to contribute.
It is a great combination of all types of emotions. You really make complex things bit simpler. Expecting more frequency from you.

Vishnu :)

Rupa said...

One more article from Mahesh..its so welcoming!! its so new!! its so endeavoring!! its so brilliant!! its so expressive!! its so thoughtful!! it reminded me of my gradma, apart from millions, who is dealing with floods!! yet you wrote in just 55 words, which made me to pack up my comments in 55 words..

santosh said...

Your writings, talks and ideas inspires me alot...

Really u r GOD gifted brother to me.

Keep it up annai.

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

Thanks Anonymous, Vishnu, Rupa, Santhosh....

@Rupa, am humbled by your response in 55 words :) :) :)

Vinayak said...

great post
i liked all of them but ENOUGH was great
keep going

Singh Amit said...

Excellent Post, Mahesh... :)
I loved all of them :)
" Enough" and " Taste Of Life" were Too brilliant.. :)
Keep writing :)
Cheers!!

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@Amit, @vinayak

thanks a bunch for ur pat guys...

Shilpa said...

Really nice, five 55-fictions at once. so cool! Last three are my favorites. and by the way beautiful and elegant template :)


shilpa

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

Hey Shilpa,

thanks :)

The credit of elegance and beautiful template goes to Shilpa. It is just your template.

Shilpa said...

oh! i did not notice. Well, it means we both like simplicity. :)

Nethra A said...

Very nice! You have written it beautifully...

Gayatri said...

Words are not 'Enough' to praise your 'Writing' and we are eagerly 'Waiting' to 'Taste The Life' more by feeling the 'Expressions' of your words.Keep going......

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

Hey Gayatri....

Wow....awesome comment/compliment.
Am humbled. So apt and relevant.
thanks a lottttt buddy

☥ ѕωαмι ηανєєη said...

all of em were gud .... creativity at its best !!

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

Thanks a bunch Naveen.
Hope you had a great time spending here

sachin said...

This is something precise and perfect.....awesome...!!!! gud one mahi...:-)

HaRy!! said...

ha ha truly classic bumch of 55 fiction :) loved the second one!! yu did that to yur english mam? really....cya around

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

Nope, i did not, Coz we never had a mam to teach english.
Its pure imagination...
Here, the English teacher is the boy's mom....
thats why it ended with "I love you, mom"

Indian Pundit said...

@mAhEsH KaLaAL

Great writings.
You are right in "Enough" story.

Our time to act is NOW to save this great nation and its people.

By the way, all the stories are too good.

Cheers

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ thanks Ind. Pundit,
welcome to my blog...

Yeah, we have to act NOW !

Lakshmi Rajan said...
This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
Mahesh said...

@ Rajan,

Welcome to Wisdomism...

Thanks for ur response and the point u made...

I knew "Enough" would not fit 55 fiction...but i thought it is the best way to reach people ...

Keep alerting me :) :) :).... thanks

Mahesh said...

@ Rajan,

Buddy, I am extremely sorry to say that i had deleted ur comment by accident and now i am trying to recover it.....
Inconvenience regretted. ... I mean it.
Please do not take it other way.....
You and your views are most welcomed to my blog....
Thanks.

Yemiledu said...

Expression aitey loved it. The best 55 fiction i ever read.