Wednesday, October 28, 2009

55 words # 3

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.


Questions-1



A young camel is asking her mom .....



" Why do we have  long eyelashes, ear hairs, seal-able nostrils ? "


"...to form a barrier against sand in desert"


" Why widened feet? "


"... to move without sinking into the sand"


 " Why our mouth is very sturdy ?"


  "...to chew thorny desert plants "


" Then why we are in a zoo now ??? "
 

33 comments:

Lakshmi Rajan said...

Ha ha .... bang on hit ! Thoughtful and still enjoyable !

Good work !

Rachana Shakyawar said...

@ Mahesh

You are quite thoughtful and it gets very well reflected in this precise fiction. I enjoyed it!

However, I wonder...where do we find camels in zoo...zo..zzz...

Mahesh said...

@ Rajan,

am glad that you enjoyed it... :)
thanks :)

Mahesh said...

@ Rachana,

Thanks a bunch for your pat and response....
I am happy that you did a raise a question(a perfect one :))

'Zoo'....
1. When i said zoo, i wanted to denote all animals that were evolved to their natural habitats but still they live in zoos for our sake.....
2. You wondered?.....yes, we find less camels in zoos due to their adaptability issues......but buddy i did see them at many zoos......i googled it too....

Anyways, am really thankful for ur question.......keep alerting me.....thanks again :)

* Am waiting for your next 55....

Shruti said...

Mahesh
this is just awesome :)!!
Beautiful, informative, yet stunning! That make's me exclaim, "Mahesh u r an expert in writing 55Fictions!"
I would say, this is ur best :)
Expecting best's from u Mahesh!!

Mahesh said...

@ Shruti

"Where is this weird Mahesh yaar?", his friends are worried bit.
"He climbed Airtel tower" said one, sarcastically .
"Why ?"
"He is being called as an expert"
"So?"
"It is being said by Shruti"
"Which Shruti?"
"Arrey yaar.....Shruti re.... 'The Queen of 55 fiction'"
Oh! is it?, then Mahesh should definitely climb Eiffel Tower yaar.... "

Thanks a lotttt buddddieee :)
My comment in 55 words shows my excitement....

PS: 55 comment is a new genre in comments section discovered by the duo Shruti-Mahesh :) :) :)

Shruti said...

Mahesh, Wow! What's all this? I am totally awe-struck after seeing your excitement! You are such a creative man! Creativity is your plus mahesh! Who else would've thought of replying me back in 55 words!!
I am typing irrelevant things mahesh! Just searching for words.. Hope u understand! :)
May u reach many new undefined heights!

P.S : My reply is also in 55 words! U can count them :)

angel from heaven said...

Thats humans for you!!For pleasure they create zoos and cage free roaming animals to display.

Mahesh said...

@ Angel,

Welcome to earth :) and my blog ....
thanks for ur time :)

Nethra said...

The way you have ended the story is awesome. Write some more like this.

Mahesh said...

@ Nethra...

Thanks buddy....
Sure, i am going to write more.....almost 10 topics, consecutively every day.... mostly 55 fics.
Thanks for your genuine pat... :)
Keep suggesting me :)

Singh Amit said...

Thought provoking 55 fiction :)
Loved it.. :)
keep writing :)
Cheers!!

Mahesh said...

@Amit,

thanks a bunch for your pat buddy.. :)

Niharika said...

Hey Mahesh,
55 Fiction is a rage amongst bloggers but very few of them write it well... I must say that this is one of the best 55 fictions I have read recently.
I had actually Bloghopped here accidently , but couldnt stop myself from commenting on this!!!!
Hope to see you around!!

Mahesh said...

@ Niharika...

Hi...welcome to wisdomism
Thanks for ur time and response...
am glad that u liked it....
:)
a pleasant surprise pat.... :)

HaRy!! said...

Now thats more likely finish! :D ... yep...poor creatures, have no idea why they end up here do they?!truly yu are one among the best of 55 fictionz!

Mahesh said...

@Hary,

Thanks a lott buddy....am quite humbled and everything is going on the tracks because of friends like u who encourage me in every move i make....
Thanks again :)

Anonymous said...

Mahesh,

Are you distracted by your 55 words fiction - from the objective of your blog.....???

- Pappu

Mahesh said...

Hi Pappu,

As far as my consciousness is concerned , am not distracted, rather i am using 55 fiction as a means to reach my blog objective....

Please let me know what made you to think that i am being distracted away from my blog objective.....I will be glad to know it..... and will be looking forward to rectify the track.

Thanks a lot buddy for raising a point of concern and relevance...
am waiting for ur reply....

santosh said...

Ha Ha Ha..!!!

Nice one... ending superb.. he he he!!!

I cudnt control my laugh....

Mahesh said...

@ Santhosh,

am happy that u r smiling coz of my writing.....keep smiling....tc

Vipul Grover said...

Brilliant :)
A very hard hitting post which with help of jus 55 words make us, the humans ashamed of ourselvs!
No one wants 2 stay in captivity, humans and animals alike!

Mahesh said...

@ Vipul,

Yes, it is indeed a shame for the self proclaimed intelligent species....

Anonymous said...

Mahesh,

I am seeing you blog as a KACHERI, you tell something and people are giving applause. And after that everything is normal and routine. I don’t see any progress in actions from the last 10 blogs.

Pappu

Mahesh said...

Hi Pappu,

Your observation is quite interesting....
Please let me know what are you expecting from my blog.....
May I know what are the 'actions' that are missing now?
Also, please tell me in your perception what are my blog objectives....
Finally, I am extremely happy that someone is trying something constructively about wisdomism with so much concern. Am elated about this.
I wanna give rational weight-age to ur suggestions. I am proud of you buddy.
Looking forward for your reply.....

Anonymous said...

Mahesh,

Take this thread as example, what happened? nothing no one got benefited with this. May be people don't encourage to go to ZOO. But still the animals will continue to be there in the zoo(Govt... :-(( ). Wild life santuries are good but why should not one ask the Govt to close the zoos. Or what is your solution to free these animals.

In every thread there is one question rised, but we are forgetting it after 1 weeek or so. We are not doing anything. If you say people's thinking will change, but for that if will take generations for the process to get the results. If I compare this blog with a team working, all I can see is just a meeting with an agenda, and no implementation.

Thanks,
Pappu

Anonymous said...

Why I am concerned about you is, people are listening to you. This in itself comes with a responsibility; you have a responsibility to change the world. It’s up to you whether get away from this or take it and do.

- Pappu

Niharika said...

@Pappu

I really appreciate your thoughts that we all have a responsibility to change this world.

I would also like to add that Mahesh has done an excellent job by writing this 55 fiction.

What can one expect from a blog?? The same impact as that one can achieve from a book/newspaper or a magazine one would say!!! And the target of spreading awareness is being achieved here!!!

Cheers!!!!

Anonymous said...

Yes,

I totally agree with you, all I want is, to take this to next level as it is reaching may be only hundreds... I am not criticizing Mahesh, I want him to go to next level and reach out to everyone. I see the strength of youth in him, but unfortunately depressed ....... and also I know him personally.

All the best Mehesh....

- Pappu

Mahesh said...

@ Pappu,

Thank you a bunch for your genuine concern about me and Wisdomism. I am really happy for your words.

Yes, I agree with you. I do have a responsibility, at different levels, in different aspects, with varied approaches and strategies. Among those, my blog is one of the means to reach the end.

I know very well that you are not criticizing me, rather your words make me to check if I am on the right tracks or not. Please do keep suggesting me whatever you feel about this blog, freely. Wisdomism is not about the person called 'Mahesh'. It is beyond me.

Regarding implementation, I want to give people a que, rather than prescribing things in a format. I want to ignite and stimulate the potential and enthusiasm among the readers.

Besides, most of my friends are into actions because of this blog. These comments play a minute part of the total responses of the blog.

You are always welcome dear to audit this blog in all aspects.

Keep alerting me, always :) :) :)

Mahesh said...

@ Niharika,

Thanks a lot for your analytical response in a precise and rational way which reflected the wisdom in you.
Thanks for your encouragement again.
:) :) :)

Anonymous said...

'most of my friends are into actions because of this blog.' This made me very happy....... I was expecting this......... :-) :-) :-)

- Pappu

Saurabh Panshikar said...

Haha! Lol

I'd read this as a email joke... Right in the face!

Enjoyed this post totally!