Friday, October 16, 2009

55 words # 2

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.



 Deepawali 


"Please.....only one!", Kittu asked his mom one more time.
 "No", She replied.
 "Last year also I didn't buy it", he pleaded.
 "OK, but small one", she said, and gave him ten rupees.
  Kittu ran out of his hut and bought a small   rocket.  He lit it with excitement.  It didn't take off...
  Manufacturing defect.


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Happy Deepawali


We have different types of crackers for Deepawali . Among all of them , please do not forget to buy at-least one rocket . Because, there are many children around us, who cannot afford it, and will be eagerly awaiting to watch them in sky, with joy and  excitement. Lets share their happiness, smiles and spirit. Happy Deepawali.


25 comments:

sachin said...

Hi mahi....HAPPY DIWALI FIRST OF ALL.....how cleanly and nicly you are able to present you ideas with in 55 words...on this diwali i wil try my best to make one of the kittus around me to smile and dance in joy...

raghav said...

Its just amazing how you are playing with words and conveying the right message in a way that it is profoundly felt by everyone who reads....ur consistency is just wonderful.

Bring it on and keep it coming.
Urs.
Raghav

Anonymous said...

Again can't stop writting a comment, keep up the great work.

- Pappu

Shilpa said...

Beautiful 55 fiction.I specially liked the rocket suggestion.
Happy Diwali to you.

santosh said...

***WISH YOU HAPPY DIWALI***

Singh Amit said...

Touching and beautiful.. :)
Nicely written with wonderful message... :)

Wish You A Very Happy Diwali

Cheers!!

☥ ѕωαмι ηανєєη said...

a festival shud be so for everyone :)

a good thought

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ Sachin,

Yes, i know that you wil be the first person to respond ....hav masthi aur mazaa with kittus of bidar
haapy deepawali re....
celebrate safely

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ Raghav,

Thanks a ton for your pat buddy. Frankly, it is becoz of the encouragement and support from frns like u, i am on d track..... hope i wil keep going

thanks again
happy deepawali ra
tc

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ Shilpa

Thanks n wish u d same buddy :)

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ Pappu,

Thanks a lottttt pappu....
happy deepawali dear
tc

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@Santhosh

deepawali subhakankshalu thammudu :)

Nethra A said...

Happy festival!! I too go on terrace to watch others burn crackers, not because I can't afford, but because I suppose crackers lead to pollution. However, that doesn't stop me from watching others play.

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ Amit,

thanks a bunch for your pat buddy
Happy deewali ...
celebrate safely....
tc :)

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ Netra,

Yea, i got ur point...
its valid too....the sound and air pollution....
I thought it will be too prescriptive to say all these things ....
My point was to bring out the social aspect of diwali....
anyways, thanks for your genuine point....
Keep analysing....
Happy deewali....
Hav cheerful time on terrace :)

Rachana Shakyawar said...

Wow! What an end!! Simply loved your 55fiction! Wishing U too A very Happy Diwali!

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@Rachana

Thanks a ton for your response buddy......
Hav br8 celebrations with fun n frolic
tc

RSV said...

I must ssy it is indeed a great suggestion..
I think I will get I'll rockets!!
HAPPY DIWALI BUDDY..

HaRy!! said...

hmm though the moral is quite convincing , i felt sooo bad for the poooor kid :( !! Quite a sad Diwali tale...but good awareness!..cya around dude!!

Shruti said...

Mahesh, very good 55Fiction :)
Visit my profile, Something is waiting for you :)

mAhEsH KaLaAL said...

@ Hary,
@ Shruti,

thanks for ur pat :) :)

Shruti said...

Mahesh, couldn't see u in my blog these days? Very busy eh?

Yemiledu said...

Iam falling in love with your 55 fictions...Awesome they are !

Yemiledu said...

Those awards..You did deserve :~)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Yemiledu...

Thanks a bunchchchch for your encouraging words and the lovely pat...
am verry much glad dat u liked them :)