Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.
Deepawali
"Please.....only one!", Kittu asked his mom one more time.
"No", She replied.
"Last year also I didn't buy it", he pleaded.
"OK, but small one", she said, and gave him ten rupees.
Kittu ran out of his hut and bought a small rocket. He lit it with excitement. It didn't take off...
Manufacturing defect.
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Happy Deepawali
We have different types of crackers for Deepawali . Among all of them , please do not forget to buy at-least one rocket . Because, there are many children around us, who cannot afford it, and will be eagerly awaiting to watch them in sky, with joy and excitement. Lets share their happiness, smiles and spirit. Happy Deepawali.
25 comments:
Hi mahi....HAPPY DIWALI FIRST OF ALL.....how cleanly and nicly you are able to present you ideas with in 55 words...on this diwali i wil try my best to make one of the kittus around me to smile and dance in joy...
Its just amazing how you are playing with words and conveying the right message in a way that it is profoundly felt by everyone who reads....ur consistency is just wonderful.
Bring it on and keep it coming.
Urs.
Raghav
Again can't stop writting a comment, keep up the great work.
- Pappu
Beautiful 55 fiction.I specially liked the rocket suggestion.
Happy Diwali to you.
***WISH YOU HAPPY DIWALI***
Touching and beautiful.. :)
Nicely written with wonderful message... :)
Wish You A Very Happy Diwali
Cheers!!
a festival shud be so for everyone :)
a good thought
@ Sachin,
Yes, i know that you wil be the first person to respond ....hav masthi aur mazaa with kittus of bidar
haapy deepawali re....
celebrate safely
@ Raghav,
Thanks a ton for your pat buddy. Frankly, it is becoz of the encouragement and support from frns like u, i am on d track..... hope i wil keep going
thanks again
happy deepawali ra
tc
@ Shilpa
Thanks n wish u d same buddy :)
@ Pappu,
Thanks a lottttt pappu....
happy deepawali dear
tc
@Santhosh
deepawali subhakankshalu thammudu :)
Happy festival!! I too go on terrace to watch others burn crackers, not because I can't afford, but because I suppose crackers lead to pollution. However, that doesn't stop me from watching others play.
@ Amit,
thanks a bunch for your pat buddy
Happy deewali ...
celebrate safely....
tc :)
@ Netra,
Yea, i got ur point...
its valid too....the sound and air pollution....
I thought it will be too prescriptive to say all these things ....
My point was to bring out the social aspect of diwali....
anyways, thanks for your genuine point....
Keep analysing....
Happy deewali....
Hav cheerful time on terrace :)
Wow! What an end!! Simply loved your 55fiction! Wishing U too A very Happy Diwali!
@Rachana
Thanks a ton for your response buddy......
Hav br8 celebrations with fun n frolic
tc
I must ssy it is indeed a great suggestion..
I think I will get I'll rockets!!
HAPPY DIWALI BUDDY..
hmm though the moral is quite convincing , i felt sooo bad for the poooor kid :( !! Quite a sad Diwali tale...but good awareness!..cya around dude!!
Mahesh, very good 55Fiction :)
Visit my profile, Something is waiting for you :)
@ Hary,
@ Shruti,
thanks for ur pat :) :)
Mahesh, couldn't see u in my blog these days? Very busy eh?
Iam falling in love with your 55 fictions...Awesome they are !
Those awards..You did deserve :~)
@ Yemiledu...
Thanks a bunchchchch for your encouraging words and the lovely pat...
am verry much glad dat u liked them :)
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