Tuesday, August 31, 2010

tRace - 77 Fiction

Note:- 77 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 77 words.

tRace


It is a tough race of marathon, with all brutal competitive elements.

Eminent and accomplished runners are already miles ahead .

One person, with improper vision and an artificial leg, but enormous potential, is trying to give tough competition to the remaining contenders. 

She did fell down many times till now, but her spirit of survival and existence for herself, is making her to move forward.

She needs  desperate support and immediate medication

Her name is India, Rural.

8 comments:

Roshmi Sinha said...

Succinct!

Mehak said...

super! i love it. :)

Gyanban said...

Must say original thought deserves the kudos, but you might want to look into the sentence construction a little bit.

dialoguewithyou said...

Awesome work Mahesh :)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Roshmi...
Thanks

@ Mehak...
Thanks buddy

@ Gyanban...
I do agree with you...will work on it in my next posts. Thanks a bunch for the honest feedback and the pat :)
keep responding

@ Dialogue..
Thanks buddy :)
keep dropping by :)

aativas said...

Actually rural India is weakened by those who are moving ahead at its cost.. not only support but a positive discrimination is needed.

Cherry Blossom said...

India may be termed as a backward country by the West but even the Westerners do realize and commend the true potential elements that India treasures- significance of life, authenticity of thoughts, unity under diverse situations, a rich culture and tradition. Such values make our country unique. When you talk about support, we are the first ones who can provide support and bring a change. India is growing strong and will one day, stand as a tough competitor in the race.
An inspiring and good post. Well correlated.

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Aativas...
Well said buddy...
yes, we need positive discrimination to bridge the widening gap...

@ Cherry...
You said it.
Lets hope that one day will come where the diversity of india flourishes within its domain and bounds without any inequality...
Thanks a lot for such a mature and comprehensive feedback on this happening issue...
keep your wise thoughts coming...
Thanks again :)