Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Sick - 55 Fiction


Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.

Sick

It is paining him again.

His age of seven could not tolerate it anymore.

Raju has been suffering from one of the widespread diseases for last 3 years.

In his case it is hereditary.

In spite of so much scientific advancement, medical science is yet to invent remedy for it.


It is Chronic.

It is Hunger.

PS : Nearly 212 million people suffer from chronic hunger and undernourishment in India, while others spend their time trying to lose weight.

15 comments:

Ritu said...

Hard hitting

Shilpa Garg said...

I second Ritu... Hard hitting!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Ritu
@ Shilpa Garg..

Yes, hard hitting, in fact hardest hitting ... particularly when the mild HCL boils in those tender stomachs .

Neha said...

I third Ritu and Shilpa - hard hitting and naked truth!

Anonymous Someone said...

True :(

Mehak said...

sad but yet another brutal truth of our existence. :(

Roshmi Sinha said...

Hard hitting! You have a way with words!

Beyond Horizon said...

rightly expressed.....bitter truth.....strong words in PS.....

santosh said...

Infact it is naked truth and we all have to do something where we can feed atleast some people. But for that we need to have responsibility.
How many of us have it and do it?

Chatterbox said...

Very painful and sad :(
Bitter truth powerfully expressed!

Nethra said...

Science can't solve the hunger, we should.

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Neha...
I second my reply, ...hardest hitting....naked HCL hitting the naked stomachs

@ Anonymous someone...
Brutal truth.

@ Mehak...
Truth of survival

@ Roshmi Sinha...
I would say, hardest hitting...thanks .

@ Beyond Horizon...
Bitter and brutal truth

@ Santhosh...
Agree with you completely, word by word and am proud of your commitment and dedication towards the social causes .

@ Chatterbox...
lets say it Brutal truth

@ Nethra ...
This is what exactly the intention behind his post.

HaRy!! said...

awesome buddy! its pandemic!! u just gave me an idea for a post!..thanks!

Ramesh Sood said...

So much learning all around.. if only we learn to bend to pick it up.. Thanks Mahesh..you have a way with words..

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@Hary...
Thanks.....do let me know once you are done

@ Ramesh ji...
Yes,we need to just look around and many things are in dire need for our attention and support
Thanks for the feedback