This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 20; the twentieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
... wet roads , fresh streams, bathed trees and tired leaves, virgin rain drops, a beautiful house, romantic and inviting ambiance, lonely couple, hot coffee, budding love, gushing instincts , drops shying away slowly, touching distance, natural desires, appealing looks, stealing thoughts, bridging silence, audible heart beats ...... but the only disappointment is that this is not a 55 fiction
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Credits
Image - Window Rain Drops by Eric Alder
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12 comments:
as u ended the post "It is not 55 fiction...." even though completing in 55 words makes me feel that...
"IT IS" what ever you wrote..though u ended it saying IT IS NOT....
finally unsaid things understood/felt gives 100 times more happiness...;)
Felt more like poetry. Words used to really good effect.
Needn't be fiction, you have written it well! Could feel the rain in your prosaic poetry! :)
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Glad it is not a 55-Fiction.. Have a great day.. When it comes to 55 or 77 Fiction you are rocking Mahesh.. As always I admire your work a lot..
55 poetic words are here and how can I stop commenting less than 55..
"gushing instincts, touching distance, bridging silence, audible heart beats" - Awesome awesome awesome for this Mahesh..
Good luck for BAT....and ~ the pic became our.. the home became our... ~
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Is it confusing? Or is it a fiction 55 saying its not a fiction 55 in 55 words?? o.O
LOL, that was a different you with the same old unpredictability.
Very nice one Mahesh.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Whatever it is, it is good. :)
Lyrical Prose ..... Reminded me of my first date in school :)
:D Lyrical indeed...Could so see words taking shapes...
Lovely .. you have put all shades into one and have finally claimed its not a fiction ! I liked the idea , very interesting :)The words are beautified leaving with lovely imagery in mind:)
Too Good!! Audible Heart Beats!! Never heard tht phrase b4. and will never forget in future!!
All the best for BATOM
Found this rather enchanting, poetic. Well done and good entry to BAT.
JamieDedes
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