Sunday, May 8, 2011

Framed - 55 Fiction

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 20; the twentieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.



... wet roads , fresh streams, bathed trees and tired leaves, virgin rain drops, a beautiful house,  romantic and inviting ambiance, lonely couple, hot coffee, budding love, gushing instincts , drops shying away slowly, touching distance, natural desires, appealing looks, stealing thoughts, bridging silence, audible heart beats ...... but the only disappointment is that this is not a 55 fiction


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Credits

Image - Window Rain Drops by Eric Alder
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12 comments:

nikhy said...

as u ended the post "It is not 55 fiction...." even though completing in 55 words makes me feel that...

"IT IS" what ever you wrote..though u ended it saying IT IS NOT....

finally unsaid things understood/felt gives 100 times more happiness...;)

The Fool said...

Felt more like poetry. Words used to really good effect.

Leo said...

Needn't be fiction, you have written it well! Could feel the rain in your prosaic poetry! :)

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Someone is Special said...

Glad it is not a 55-Fiction.. Have a great day.. When it comes to 55 or 77 Fiction you are rocking Mahesh.. As always I admire your work a lot..

55 poetic words are here and how can I stop commenting less than 55..


"gushing instincts, touching distance, bridging silence, audible heart beats" - Awesome awesome awesome for this Mahesh..

Good luck for BAT....and ~ the pic became our.. the home became our... ~

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Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

Is it confusing? Or is it a fiction 55 saying its not a fiction 55 in 55 words?? o.O

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

LOL, that was a different you with the same old unpredictability.
Very nice one Mahesh.


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Nethra said...

Whatever it is, it is good. :)

Shilpa Nair said...

Lyrical Prose ..... Reminded me of my first date in school :)

Jyoti Sharma said...

:D Lyrical indeed...Could so see words taking shapes...

Alien said...

Lovely .. you have put all shades into one and have finally claimed its not a fiction ! I liked the idea , very interesting :)The words are beautified leaving with lovely imagery in mind:)

Viyoma said...

Too Good!! Audible Heart Beats!! Never heard tht phrase b4. and will never forget in future!!

All the best for BATOM

musingbymoonlight.com said...

Found this rather enchanting, poetic. Well done and good entry to BAT.

JamieDedes