This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 32; the thirty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'An Untold Story'
It was 2 in the Midnight.
Charan was in acute depression.
It was been a week since his wife Anjali committed suicide...
His best friend Vincent came to console him and said
"How did this happen?"
" She came to know that i had an affair with my colleague"
"Is it true?????"
"Yes, of course, I do"
"But someone had lied to her "
"Who's that??"
"You know him, Vincent"
"Who???"
"It's you "....
........
The next day both were found stabbed to death.
Later, police investigation revealed that Anjali's death was a planned murder
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PS: A drabble is a fiction of exactly 100 words in length.
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20 comments:
Welcome back Mahesh! Glad to see participating in Blog-a-Ton! This is an Untold Story told in a gripping manner. I liked the twist in the end that even Anjali's death was a murder.
Someone is Special
@Someone special
Hey thanks for the pat buddy :)
will try to be regular :)
Nice story. And thanks for introducing a drabble :)
:) Great!
Glad to see you Mahesh - after a long gap you are back with your gripping story!!
By the way: Who murdered Anjali?
@Aativas ...
Thanks for the pat buddy :) :) :)
am really happy to meet u guys on this platform .... :)
Coming to the post,
the "untold story" lies in your question....
nice story! the last bit adds a twist that keeps me thinking about what actually happened.
sapna, just another wake up call
http://justanotherwakeupcall.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/family-secrets-an-untold-story-short-story/
With a twist in the tale. Surreal it is.
Ahaa!! gripping hundred words...liked the twist at the end...well done buddy :)
I am here
http://odizzey.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/an-untold-story/
Leaves the reader thinking! I like that! :)
BAT32 - Apala
Short and crispy 100 words magic... All the very best.. :)
Super nice!
Dude you rock man....:D
Gr8 story with a twist .... drabble is a new thing that I learnt ...
Amit - The Frivolous Analyser
Whoa. Crisp fiction with a brilliant twist. PS: Don't we need to use the exact words An Untold Story in the piece?
Good One and I learnt what is a drabble today. Thanks for that
jaishvats
Mahesh,
This untold story was Spic-and-span! :)
I really liked it. It was so engrossing that I wished it wasn't a Drabble :P
I want to read more from you..so you have a follower now :)
Good one, there is an untold story in your drabble, liked it :)
Do visit mine http://www.stylisharjun.blogspot.in/2012/10/an-untold-story.html
misunderstandings can be very destructive
ATB for BAT :)
Nah. I did not like this one a lot.
Maybe it's your concept of sticking to a 'drabble' that made me think that things happened way too quickly.
I remember - long, long time ago, I had read a post of yours - it was the story of a tree (maybe in Gingerchai competition??). And I remember I loved that post. Which is precisely why I came with high expectations :)
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