Monday, March 1, 2010

Identity - 55 Fiction

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words.

 Identity


Suryaprathap Sharma was supervising the near to complete Ram mandir in his village......
Suddenly, he stopped at a colourful painting of Lord Hanuman on a side wall of the temple and was in awe of the beautiful master piece .......
He called his subordinate and inquired about the painter........
His subordinate said, "He went for namaz"

PS : I wrote this age old utopian dogma on the occasion of M F Hussain's controversial citizenship as well as his pictures on Hindu Goddess.

11 comments:

sandeep said...

thats 'fiction'! and as you said Utopian

Nethra said...

That was quite nice. :)

Shilpa Garg said...

Wow! That's a good one!! Speaks out loud about a lot of issues!!

geeta said...

Great work buddy...Thats why I say you have your own great style of writing..

Cheers

Gyanban said...

Could easily rename it 55 reality. I know of at least two such artists.

Good stuff.

Vibhuti B said...

A 55ier aptly summing up Indian scenario..It was so clear that you needn't have explained at all...2 thumbs up! :)

aativas said...

You have captured the reality (meaning contradiction!) of life really well!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ sandeep...
Thanks for ur time and i hope more visits from u now onwards...

@Nethra...
Thanks buddy :). It is coz of u am back to 55iers and am enjoying the writing.

@ Shilpa garg...
thanks for the appreciative pat and the response.

@ Geeta...
Thanks for the heavy words...am humbled..... cheers too.

@ Gyanban.....
i totally agree with you.....it is almost a 55 non fiction.....happening and contemporary. Thanks for the feedback. Hoping for more visits from you...

@ Vibhuti...

Thanks a bunch for the response and the pat :).... YEa...thumbs up buddy

@ Aativas....
Thanks for the appreciation and the time. thanks for dropping by.

Adisha said...

A wonderful post dealing with a sensitive subject... Great going !

sachin said...

Hey mahesh..tat was really a good one .........:-)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@ Sachin.... thanks for the pat.

@ Adisha ..... thanks again for the good words and the encouragement .