Monday, August 15, 2011

Free-55 Fiction

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 23; the twenty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for this month is FREE.

Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 55 words.



We got freedom.
We have freedom....
.......
Freedom to express and choose .
                 to exploit and suppress.
                 to adapt and evolve.
                 to dilute and corrupt.
                 to have Religion
                 to be slaves of Globalization ...

Freedom for Farmers to drink pesticides
                 for Tribes to convert
                 for Corporates to suck

But we forgot that our freedom was not for Free

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15 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

It was just yesterday while I was writing a post on open source software that I was re-realizing that freedom is a word with vague meaning. 'Free as in Freedom of Speech' is very much different than 'free in free beer' and yet, both are termed freedom.
Freedom comes with liabilities, sparing the usage of the word restrictions with freedom, but liabilities are a must, or else Freedom turns to anarchy and chaos in no time.

Nice post.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

sowmya said...

wow! its realistic thought ....
keep writing & smiling
all the best

Enchanta said...

Funnily enough, I wrote a 55er too for the contest!

All the best!

Sadiya Merchant said...

very straight n effectiv. i like d crisp tone :)

aativas said...

I do agree, Sir!

The Fool said...

This is not 55 Fiction. This is 55 Reality. Sad but true. Well written. Best of luck for Blog-a-ton. You can find my post here In search of freedom

Someone is Special said...

Mahesh, I agree.. What a 55 man.. Good luck for Blog-a-Ton.. Free... Are we?

Someone is Special

Aashish Sood said...

Very nice written post and on similar line of thought as my post!

ATB for BAT

Do check out my entry at Free? To do what exactly?

Regards
Wandering Thoughts

Brijender Singh said...

A very telling rendition on the state of affairs that plagues us today-the problems, the misplaced intents, the forgotten duties, the exaggerated privileges.
Crisp and terse, as you always are-brilliant piece of writing!

pri said...

a hundred glimpses of reality in your fiction of 55 words...a strong post indeed!

the mind cant help but wish---if only we could achieve freedom in the true sense of the word, and if only we did not have to pay such a heavy price for it...

all the best for BAT!

you can read my entry here---
FREE

Sunil Padiyar said...

thats a nice 55... ATB for BAT

the critics said...

simple but it is wonderful and powerful.........loved it

here is mine

The search for eternal freedom – A Dragonfly’s curse

Vikram Pyati said...

Very aptly captured that over everything else we do have a freedom of choice, which we should exercise with constraint....

nidhi said...

really good..i remember how the newspapers used to be flooded how farmers commit suicide and everything..but everything was forgotten.. really feels nice to see something good about it
my postFREE
NIDHI

Rachana Shakyawar said...

Indeed! And absolutly..I understand this point of time...wht freedom means...perhaps million of things in tis world are hard t change since generations hav mould them...however..bringing a churn in life in the though process is wht Life define...perahps you r done one of that small yet simple yet worthy thing...Bow to U!

~U keep the Spark ALive..