Monday, December 13, 2010

Independence - 77 Fiction

Note:- 77 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of 77 words.
Independence

Like all children in the primary school,  Karthik has got affinity for flag hoisting celebrations.

It is obvious that what matters for him more is the sweets distribution .

The day has come.

After the completion of all flag rituals and national formalities, the sweets distribution has started and so is Karthik's enthusiasm .

The distribution has ended but still his hands are empty .

He is not sure whether the reason is the school wall or his balloon business.

PS : Am elated to be back from my sabbatical   :)
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10 comments:

HaRy!! said...

classic Mahesh!! i know yu will to show the struggle of children in the end... touche!!! yu never lose yur touch mate!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@Hary...
Hey thanks for the constant pat dude :).

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

back? with a bang.
That was like I had known you last. Different from the rest.
Welcome back, and nice work.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Ramesh Sood said...

Good to see you back.. had been wondering about you Mahesh.. well your magic stays. well done..

Rachana Shakyawar said...

I'm so so so touched with the sentiment! Perhaps really sad, it's a common view these days on the road in India!

Every time I see such scene...the next thought that strikes my mind is 'O lord, I've been sure blessed!' and sure the other moment I forget the tiny silly sad knock outs I have in dwelling daily life!

I truly wish if the things would have been much much more beautiful. Like every kid going school and every kid getting balloon while playing in the green garden!

Definitely neat and thoughtful as always!
Welcome back to blogging...We sure missed a LOT in between!!


U definitely...
Keep the Spark ALive..

Roshmi Sinha said...

Welcome back :)

... and this is yet another of your vintage posts.

P.S. Hope you'll blog more regularly going forward. Atleast somewhat regularly :)

Beyond Horizon said...

Probably the "In"....in INDEPENDENCE is still missing...

missed your wisdomism :)

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@Blasphemous . @Ramesh sood @rachana @roshmi @beyond horizon thanks lot for your warm welcome and touching response . . . And yes am going to be regular both as a reader and as a writer . . . .Thanks once again for your encouraging pat . . . Keep dropping by . . . Your presence means a lot for my blog

Chetan said...

man..you are just too good..
you convey the thoughs so righly and meaningfully..

Mahesh Kalaal said...

@Chetan ...
Thanks buddy :)